THIS IS SO COOL. I am obsessed with the world you built! Some men keeping time with their bellies, other with the weather - this whole system of time travel and time served is fascinating, delivered by a strong narrative voice. I hope you’re going to be writing more in this world!
Thanks for your nice comment. You made my day! I'd definitely like to write more in this setting. I've been kicking around a few different ideas that will hopefully come to fruition at some point.
This short story gifts the reader with a compelling narrator, a complete vision of a future world and a complex plot offering hope and despair in equal measure. Good read!
THIS IS SO COOL. I am obsessed with the world you built! Some men keeping time with their bellies, other with the weather - this whole system of time travel and time served is fascinating, delivered by a strong narrative voice. I hope you’re going to be writing more in this world!
Thanks for your nice comment. You made my day! I'd definitely like to write more in this setting. I've been kicking around a few different ideas that will hopefully come to fruition at some point.
This short story gifts the reader with a compelling narrator, a complete vision of a future world and a complex plot offering hope and despair in equal measure. Good read!
Thanks for the kind words/review!
Great comment! "Wait and hope it goes away" seems to be the mantra for dealing with tough issues these days.